Same prompts. Same model. Different instructions.
We score both outputs across 7 cognitive metrics
to measure — not just show — the difference.
Standard LLM — unconstrained proseCLN Format — operator-structured7 metrics · scored · verifiable
The Scoring System
7 metrics. Each scored 1–10. Measured from text properties — not opinion.
!Semantic DensitySD
Meaning per character. High filler words = low density.
Counts connective tissue: "furthermore", "it is worth noting",
"in addition to this", etc.
SD = 1 − (filler_words / total_words)
filler list: ~40 phrases tracked per text
.Scan SpeedSS
Time to locate a specific fact. Measured by line count
to first actionable item and average line length.
Short left-column operators = instant semantic pre-scan.
SS = 10 − (avg_line_chars / 20)
capped 1–10; operator col bonus +2
=Structure ClaritySC
Ratio of typed semantic units to total lines.
Each CLN operator = one unambiguous semantic type.
Prose has zero explicit typing.
SC = typed_lines / total_lines × 10
CLN: every line typed · Prose: 0 typed
*Recall EaseRE
Proxy for how much of the content a reader retains
after single read. Based on chunking: isolated short
lines > long embedded clauses (Miller's Law).
RE = chunks_under_7_words / total_chunks
× 10 · chunk = one semantic unit
~Tension VisibilityTV
Are trade-offs, paradoxes, and unknowns explicitly
surfaced? Prose often buries tensions in hedged clauses.
CLN ~ and ? operators make them first-class citizens.
TV = explicit_tensions / total_tensions_in_text
× 10 · tensions identified by domain analysis
→Action ClarityAC
Can you extract "what to do" without re-reading?
Counts sentences that contain an imperative verb
and are NOT buried inside a paragraph.
AC = isolated_imperatives / total_imperatives
× 10 · CLN . and → are structurally isolated
?Unknown HonestyUH
Does the output admit what it doesn't know?
LLMs often hedge vaguely ("may depend on…").
CLN ? operator forces explicit placement of unknowns.
Score strips above:
Average LLM baseline
CLN-instructed output
// Methodology
=same prompt → 2 model calls: no system prompt · CLN spec v2.1
as system prompt=model: same Claude Sonnet 4.6 instance · temperature
0.5=scoring: computed from text properties, not subjective
rating~CLN is not always better — prose wins for narrative,
empathy, storytelling~topics chosen to maximize structural contrast — this is
intentional selection bias→goal: show where CLN adds measurable value — not universal
claim
Comparison Articles
Each file: same prompt — both outputs — 7-metric scorecard — visual analysis